Thursday, May 20, 2010

How do i end this conclusion? please help (:?

Overall, “Flowers for Algernon,” leaves readers an idea of self-consciousness and to appreciate life as it is. Charlie Gordon is the ideal example of people that get mistreated because of their mental disabilities. Like Charlie, every person is born with his or her own special characteristics, talents and flaws. Although many people attempt to change various aspects of their own lives, they should accept who they are and give up the longing for perfection.











***i just need one more sentence to finish this.


ive been stuck for a while now..but yeah feel free to fix anything else

How do i end this conclusion? please help (:?
So, the next time you find yourself wishing your life was perfect, remember Charlie.





Something like that? Actually, I think the last sentence you already have works well.





(edit) Yeah, I like the one below better.
Reply:How about this:


Overall, "Flowers for Algernon" leaves readers with an idea of self-consciousness and an appreciation of life as it is. Charlie Gordon is a perfect example of someone who gets mistreated because of his disabilities. Like Charlie, everyone is born with his or her own special characteristics, talents and flaws. Although many people attempt to change various aspects of their own lives they should accept who they are and give up the longing for perfection. After all, most perfect people are boring.


I changed the words a little but I tried to keep it original; just the way you wrote it. Unfortunately I had trouble with the conclusion as well, as you can see. Sorry I wasn't much help. Good luck.








Edit- I like the one above also.
Reply:How 'bout something like...





Nobody is made perfect, and attempting to achieve such results can lead to unexpected, even disastrous consequences.


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